yourbone
Pokémon Ranger
The first part of the description of Kabutops is incomplete (unsure how it should be fixed).
"On rare occasions found as fossils..." -> "On rare occasions, they are found as fossils..."
In the girl in the first house coming from Ice Path's text, there is an extra "don't".
There should be a period after "desert" and before "Once".
Description is incomplete (unsure how it should be fixed).
End of Firebreather Walt's text: "Til then, later!" -> "'Til then, later!".
The man in Goldenrod Radio Tower's text: "Let see if..." -> "Let's see if...".
Juggler Irwin's text: "Oh, That's good!" -> "Oh, that's good!".
Sailer Huey's text: "Lets get down..." -> "Let's get down...".
Black Belt Kenji's text needs a period at the end. Also in Black Belt Kenji's text, there is a typo when he says: "Lets battle again!" -> "Let's battle again!" But I don't have enough room to upload a screenshot of it in this thread.
"On rare occasions found as fossils..." -> "On rare occasions, they are found as fossils..."
In the girl in the first house coming from Ice Path's text, there is an extra "don't".
There should be a period after "desert" and before "Once".
Description is incomplete (unsure how it should be fixed).
End of Firebreather Walt's text: "Til then, later!" -> "'Til then, later!".
The man in Goldenrod Radio Tower's text: "Let see if..." -> "Let's see if...".
Juggler Irwin's text: "Oh, That's good!" -> "Oh, that's good!".
Sailer Huey's text: "Lets get down..." -> "Let's get down...".
Black Belt Kenji's text needs a period at the end. Also in Black Belt Kenji's text, there is a typo when he says: "Lets battle again!" -> "Let's battle again!" But I don't have enough room to upload a screenshot of it in this thread.
