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Pokémon Ranger
Below is a list of screenshots of typos I have found in the Pokedex of Pokemon 3D version Indev [0.48].
This screenshot shows Mr. Mime in the Pokedex. The description sentence of the Pokemon is incomplete, an alternative to improve the sentence could be "As a skilled mime from birth, it gains the ability to create invisible objects as it matures." With a comma in the middle of the sentence and the word "as" added to the beginning of the sentence.
This screenshot shows the Pokemon Seel in the Pokedex. The first sentence of the description requires a pause in between the two separate ideas. An example could be "Although it can't walk well on land, it is a graceful swimmer." With a comma in between the sentence.
This screenshot shows the Pokemon Umbreon in the Pokedex. The description sentence of the Pokemon is incorrect and is missing a word, and an improvement could be "When agitated, it protects itself by spraying poisonous sweat from its pores." With the addition of the command and the word "it".
This screenshot shows the Pokemon Teddiursa in the Pokedex. The first part of the description of the Pokemon is incomplete, however I do not know of an alternative to improve the description. I'm not exactly sure what was meant to be explained in the description, so I am not sure how it should be fixed, but I do know that it needs to be fixed somehow.
This screenshot shows the Pokemon Skarmory in the Pokedex. The description sentence of the Pokemon is incorrect, and an alternative could be "Although its sturdy wings look heavy, they are actually hollow and light, alllowing it to fly freely in the sky." With the addition of the comma and the word "Although".
This screenshot shows the Pokemon Murkrow in the Pokedex. The description sentence of the Pokemon is incorrect, and a comma is needed to separate the two ideas. An example would be "Feared and loathed by many, it is believed to being misfortune to all those who see it at night." With the addition of the comma in between.
This screenshot shows the Pokemon Metang in the Pokedex. The description sentence of the Pokemon is incomplete, and an alternative would be "When two BELDUM fuse together, a magnetic nervous system placed their brains in union." With the addition of the comma in between and the word "a".
This screenshot shows the Pokemon Gabite in the Pokedex. The description sentence of the Pokemon is incorrect, and an alternative would be "As it digs to expand its nest, it habitually digs up gems that it then hoards in its nest." With the addition of the comma and the word "it".
This screenshot shows the Pokemon Magmar in the Pokedex. The description sentence of the Pokemon is incorrect, and an alternative could be "It dislikes cold places, and scorches flames to make the environment suitable for itself." With the addition of the comma, the word "and", and the change of "scorching" to "scorches".
This screenshot shows the Pokemon Snubbull in the Pokedex. The description sentence of the Pokemon is incorrect, and an alternative could be "Although it looks frightening, it is actually kind and affectionate. It is very popular among women." With the addition of the comma and the word "it".
This screenshot shows Mr. Mime in the Pokedex. The description sentence of the Pokemon is incomplete, an alternative to improve the sentence could be "As a skilled mime from birth, it gains the ability to create invisible objects as it matures." With a comma in the middle of the sentence and the word "as" added to the beginning of the sentence.
This screenshot shows the Pokemon Seel in the Pokedex. The first sentence of the description requires a pause in between the two separate ideas. An example could be "Although it can't walk well on land, it is a graceful swimmer." With a comma in between the sentence.
This screenshot shows the Pokemon Umbreon in the Pokedex. The description sentence of the Pokemon is incorrect and is missing a word, and an improvement could be "When agitated, it protects itself by spraying poisonous sweat from its pores." With the addition of the command and the word "it".
This screenshot shows the Pokemon Teddiursa in the Pokedex. The first part of the description of the Pokemon is incomplete, however I do not know of an alternative to improve the description. I'm not exactly sure what was meant to be explained in the description, so I am not sure how it should be fixed, but I do know that it needs to be fixed somehow.
This screenshot shows the Pokemon Skarmory in the Pokedex. The description sentence of the Pokemon is incorrect, and an alternative could be "Although its sturdy wings look heavy, they are actually hollow and light, alllowing it to fly freely in the sky." With the addition of the comma and the word "Although".
This screenshot shows the Pokemon Murkrow in the Pokedex. The description sentence of the Pokemon is incorrect, and a comma is needed to separate the two ideas. An example would be "Feared and loathed by many, it is believed to being misfortune to all those who see it at night." With the addition of the comma in between.
This screenshot shows the Pokemon Metang in the Pokedex. The description sentence of the Pokemon is incomplete, and an alternative would be "When two BELDUM fuse together, a magnetic nervous system placed their brains in union." With the addition of the comma in between and the word "a".
This screenshot shows the Pokemon Gabite in the Pokedex. The description sentence of the Pokemon is incorrect, and an alternative would be "As it digs to expand its nest, it habitually digs up gems that it then hoards in its nest." With the addition of the comma and the word "it".
This screenshot shows the Pokemon Magmar in the Pokedex. The description sentence of the Pokemon is incorrect, and an alternative could be "It dislikes cold places, and scorches flames to make the environment suitable for itself." With the addition of the comma, the word "and", and the change of "scorching" to "scorches".
This screenshot shows the Pokemon Snubbull in the Pokedex. The description sentence of the Pokemon is incorrect, and an alternative could be "Although it looks frightening, it is actually kind and affectionate. It is very popular among women." With the addition of the comma and the word "it".
